your writing is extremely captivating. the fanfiction is pretty interesting. however, i would like to point out that you're not doing a very good job of portraying naruto characters or following naruto's facts. #1: kakashi does not use the sharingan in a taijutsu battle (sharingans can see the movements, but it's at a disadvantage with taijutsu users because you'd have to react fast to that vision), #2: kakashi would kill any uchiha if a fight should arise, unlike the uchihas (who depend almost solely on their bloodline limit), kakashi's taijutsu is his main source of offense, his skills are all balanced, #3: it was implied that kakashi is the strongest member of anbu. his sharingan skills also surpassed even the highest members of the uchiha clan, except for itachiHow DARE I portray a character who is aloof and badass in current continuity as an emotionally immature and not yet supremely skilled teenager. How dare I. I am NOT FOLLOWING NARUTO'S FACTS VERY WELL, am I. ;__;!
you're portraying kakashi throughout this whole fanfic as some naive and immature BOY rather than a military genius fighter.
Not to mention they're wrong. Kakashi's taijutsu is good, but in a serious fight he relies on ninjutsu. I also don't know where the 'best ANBU evar' thing came from. On top of that, they managed to completely miss the fact, which I thought I made perhaps too clear, that Kakashi attempted to use Chidori at one point during that fight.
